Needs heavy production and dynamics
Try to create more dynamics using your drums. The drums play a really big role in a song, just looping one drumloop over and over is bound to destroy all transitions in the song, making it sound like a really wierd one-liner of some kind.
I like the guitars that gets introduced, but you could REALLY use the drums to make the transition a LOT better. Also the rhytm guitar goes into crazy bass-ranges in the end, you need to heavily use an equalizer to get rid of some bass.
This song lacks dynamics, but it's mainly the drums fault, I really like the idea you got going around ~35 using the transition you do, but poor production makes my subwoofer die after that. Keep enjoy making music! :D