Charleon's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Mario Bros. (Punk Remix)]

Like two different worlds?

I don't know why I'm hesistant to the tune in this song, I just don't FULLY like the guitars along with the trumpet-orchestral sound, i think the main melody could be drawn out alot more. I mostly liked the drums, but then had a second thought in the end where a snaredrum just kept playing over and over, Try to give the drums more variety in certain parts of the song, and alternate the velocity of them.
Even though I give so much critique, this is a definite 4/5, 7/10!

giftedbuttwisted responds:

Well it's ska which is punk with trumpet. Thanks for the constructive criticism, it's much appreciated XP

[Don't Stop Believing (8bi]

Very cool performance

What instruments did you use while making this? The harmony in the beginning is very beautiful, also I think you've caught the essence of the song. I would add a little bit more variety to the drums though, like a fill here and there, And maybe try to go all out with the 8 bit and do some crazy arpeggios here and there, because the song didn't leave me inspired all the way through. Even though I give this critiscism, I really like it!

pheel responds:

Oh please I appreciate the criticism. Gives me something to work on.
There are only 3 plugins used in the song:
Magical8bit
Triforce
and Hypercanvas.

Obviously there are a few different channels with each one in each with a different sound.

I appreciate the constructive review :)
Thank you.